tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post3425326207169464762..comments2024-03-28T15:09:21.698-04:00Comments on The Miss Rumphius Effect: My Poem for Peace - A Soldier's KidTriciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18350907653629775293noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-17736659204066068252009-03-17T18:53:00.000-04:002009-03-17T18:53:00.000-04:00I agree with Jane. It would make a very powerful p...I agree with Jane. It would make a very powerful picture book like Bunting's The Wall. Wonderful work.tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14651702526007175517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-81957641537351716862009-03-17T14:18:00.000-04:002009-03-17T14:18:00.000-04:00I agree with Jane. Also, I hope the guinea pig is ...I agree with Jane. <BR/><BR/>Also, I hope the guinea pig is okay.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-15723421453093258902009-03-16T12:51:00.000-04:002009-03-16T12:51:00.000-04:00I love the repetition and am going to suggest to m...I love the repetition and am going to suggest to my poetry students tomorrow. We will see what happens. Thanks for the stretch.Jonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-73383904932411916382009-03-16T06:58:00.000-04:002009-03-16T06:58:00.000-04:00Great voice, Tricia--love this!(And hope your guin...Great voice, Tricia--love this!<BR/><BR/>(And hope your guinea pig gets better. We've been through 2 gp deaths, and, yes, heartbreaking each time.)laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-39847649536402454062009-03-15T18:56:00.000-04:002009-03-15T18:56:00.000-04:00You know, if you make this longer, you could have ...You know, if you make this longer, you could have a gorgeous picture book.<BR/><BR/>Janejaneyolenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15396863710083180775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-33815965011412607782009-03-15T17:28:00.000-04:002009-03-15T17:28:00.000-04:00Tricia,I like your use of repetition in the poem. ...Tricia,<BR/><BR/>I like your use of repetition in the poem. Well done!Elaine Magliarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-5627501361412955482009-03-15T15:08:00.000-04:002009-03-15T15:08:00.000-04:00What a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. I hope ...What a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. I hope your guinea pig gets better! We just got two- they're cute little buggers! :)<BR/><BR/>All the best,<BR/>Lori<BR/>www.loricalabrese.comLori Calabresehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11158174410542423569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-62027344828939166542009-03-15T14:19:00.000-04:002009-03-15T14:19:00.000-04:00Oh, wow.This is really something. I am still tryin...Oh, wow.<BR/>This is really something. I am still trying to come up with something -- it's a great opportunity.tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-36446909821645321932009-03-15T12:48:00.000-04:002009-03-15T12:48:00.000-04:00Stunningly poignant. Really very strong. Thanks fo...Stunningly poignant. Really very strong. Thanks for sharing -- there's so much to be said for the power of poetry.<BR/>Also, caring for a small creature is never silly, it's necessary.tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14651702526007175517noreply@blogger.com