tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post7939808453590143021..comments2024-03-29T08:09:51.663-04:00Comments on The Miss Rumphius Effect: Poetry Stretch Results - Climbing RhymeTriciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18350907653629775293noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-62058453612734754022008-12-05T20:31:00.000-05:002008-12-05T20:31:00.000-05:00What a fine bunch of contributions!What a fine bunch of contributions!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-33590827972124361092008-12-05T13:46:00.000-05:002008-12-05T13:46:00.000-05:00Oh thank you thank you for rounding-up all this go...Oh thank you thank you for rounding-up all this good reading.Jules at 7-Imphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14439756778611468303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-11585753600909713052008-12-04T16:18:00.000-05:002008-12-04T16:18:00.000-05:00These are really fabulous!! I am so stunned to rea...These are really fabulous!! I am so stunned to read them all on what is a very grey day over here. I'm doing one for Friday Poetry, posting tomorrow morning. Thanks for the challenge and the inspiring company!Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-17376433431911065992008-12-04T13:20:00.000-05:002008-12-04T13:20:00.000-05:00Wow, Laura.You said yours wasn't lovely like all t...Wow, Laura.<BR/>You said <I>yours</I> wasn't lovely like all the rest, and that's what I thought of <I>mine</I>.<BR/><BR/>Thank you.tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-5841897657893837112008-12-04T07:26:00.000-05:002008-12-04T07:26:00.000-05:00I did a climbing rhyme this morning--nothing lovel...I did a climbing rhyme this morning--nothing lovely like the ones shared here, but definitely a timely one: http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/115010.html<BR/><BR/>Tanita, yours totally spoke to me. That is my life. Thank you for writing it.<BR/><BR/>Wow--Jane Yolen started out with a bang--stunning. I'm off to feed the kids breakfast, and then I'll be back to properly read the others.laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-33069344943039982492008-12-04T07:18:00.000-05:002008-12-04T07:18:00.000-05:00It's a challenge to write a climbing rhyme with me...It's a challenge to write a climbing rhyme with meaning -- forcing depth into structure usually doesn't work for me. I'm still not sure if this works without coming off as either too dramatic or too trite, but I've just realized I've been fiddling with this for TWO HOURS now. Good grief.<BR/>++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++<BR/><BR/>Tough, terse, family life:<BR/>You endure strife, scenes,<BR/>tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-10637968201393483182008-12-04T01:47:00.000-05:002008-12-04T01:47:00.000-05:00Loved the clever double climb in 'Delicate flakes ...Loved the clever double climb in 'Delicate flakes of lace...'<BR/>Well done, you!Scriptor Senexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17795521284516432520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-56570606063587756942008-12-04T01:06:00.000-05:002008-12-04T01:06:00.000-05:00Hi tricia, I'm going to try a climbing rhyme that ...Hi tricia, I'm going to try a climbing rhyme that starts with a climb, and also has squirrels near rhyming hurried and a kiss bliss rhyme ending.<BR/><BR/>Winter Night<BR/><BR/>The squirrels all climb<BR/>In hurried time all<BR/>While I'm warm, snug<BR/>As a bug and<BR/>Mom hugs me twice-<BR/>That feels nice, as<BR/>House mice kiss-Bliss!Douglas Florianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16128165816863246403noreply@blogger.com