tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post8011932830051740874..comments2024-03-28T15:09:21.698-04:00Comments on The Miss Rumphius Effect: Monday Poetry Stretch - TritinaTriciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18350907653629775293noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-47820178205174330982009-04-30T07:17:00.000-04:002009-04-30T07:17:00.000-04:00I enjoyed this challenge again Tricia, though have...I enjoyed this challenge again Tricia, though have ended up rushing it. Also enjoyed reading the others examples. I'm here as usual - http://theweekthatwas.wordpress.com/. Thanks Jacqueline.Jacqueline Dovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18173286368386721724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-27964582294913093772009-04-28T11:06:00.000-04:002009-04-28T11:06:00.000-04:00Jane, you have totally made my day for saying that...Jane, you have totally made my day for saying that. Thank you.Harriethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05180730302829554796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-57824778905852678152009-04-28T04:23:00.000-04:002009-04-28T04:23:00.000-04:00Well, I think that last line wrapped because of th...Well, I think that last line wrapped because of the space restrictions here...but it should all be on one line.Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-72463125387441014732009-04-28T04:21:00.000-04:002009-04-28T04:21:00.000-04:00A Noir-ish Tritina
If Mr. Potato-Head
met Ms. ...A Noir-ish Tritina <br /><br /><br />If Mr. Potato-Head <br />met Ms. Lonelyhearts, what <br />would he ask? <br /><br />What does a head ask<br />a heart, even when that head<br />is empty? Could be "What's <br /><br />up, Beautiful? What's <br />the rush?" Hearts get asked<br />that question by heads. <br /><br />When P-Head asks, "What's up, Little Lady?" Ms. L-heart says, "Who's asking?"Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-58877333411496196572009-04-27T23:18:00.000-04:002009-04-27T23:18:00.000-04:00Boy, Harriet, do I love the last line of the secon...Boy, Harriet, do I love the last line of the second poem. It really works.<br /><br />Janejaneyolenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15396863710083180775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-91058250003689877262009-04-27T22:48:00.000-04:002009-04-27T22:48:00.000-04:00A couple of attempts here.A couple of attempts <A HREF="http://spynotes.wordpress.com/2009/04/27/dots-poetry-corner/" REL="nofollow">here</A>.Harriethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05180730302829554796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-39850448808229795372009-04-27T19:40:00.000-04:002009-04-27T19:40:00.000-04:00Not sure this is what you mean:
The Moon and Me: ...Not sure this is what you mean:<br /><br />The Moon and Me: A Tritina<br />Looking last night at the moon,<br />I thought how it resembled a stone<br />Skipped by a child into the sky.<br /><br />But who would have thrown into the sky<br />Something so precious as that moon,<br />Such an enormous gem stone?<br /><br />I would have rather hung that stone<br />Around my neck, bedecked like the sky<janeyolenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15396863710083180775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7320080607016581524.post-51843403652895038832009-04-27T16:31:00.000-04:002009-04-27T16:31:00.000-04:00Oy. I should really be working on finishing my ses...Oy. I should really be working on finishing my sestina, but it's just NOT COMING together... if I have time I'll try this.tanita✿davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01671822274852087499noreply@blogger.com