The challenge this week was to write a Zeno. Here are the results.
Pat Lewis left these two poems in the comments.This was darn hard. Here's the poem I came up with.Travel by Armchair
Carol Weis left this poem in the comments.
You can take a trip by Greyhound,
motorcycle,
paddle-
wheel,
ocean liner
(package
deal)—
I prefer the
bookmo-
bile.
* * * * *
Weather by The Old Masters
The Michelangelo thunder
of an April
cloudburst
hints
at what follows
a great
rinse:
spring meadows in
Monet
prints.Great Blue
Greg K. of GottaBook shares a poem for Halloween.
The great blue heron tries to hide
itself in tall
grasses,
yet
passers see this
nature’s
pet,
take photos to
not for-
get.
© Carol Weis. All rights reserved.
Kate Coombs of Book Aunt left this poem in the comments.October 31st
Laura Purdie Salas left these poems in the comments.
Night. A graveyard. A single boy
walks soft as a
new-raised
ghost,
with each step re-
gretting
most
making that quick,
daylit
boast.Weapons Make the Warrior?
Amy Ludwig Vanderwater left this poem in the comments.
Marching in time, but out of time
into the harsh
light of
day:
Emperor Qin’s
army.
They
wield bronze swords in
arms of
clay.
* * * * *
Putting the Art Before the Horse
In Emperor Qin’s afterlife,
he would rule by
timeless
force.
But death had its
way, of
course.
Lesson? Don’t ride
a clay
horse.One Hen Speaks
Julie Larios of The Drift Record shares two poems. And yes, the first title is longer than the poem! And the second? Well, I dare you to read it without snarfing (which is exactly what I did)!
We make eggs inside our bodies.
Roosters chase us
make us
mate.
Every egg is
tempting
fate.
Farm life or your
breakfast
plate?
Tanita Davis shares a poem entitled On Intentions to Speak to Richard Peck at a Writer's Conference.
Jone of Check It Out and Deo Writer shares some zenos she wrote with her students and one of her own.
What secret incantations doIt's not too late if you still want to play. Leave me a note about your poem and I'll add it to the list.
you write upon
the sky?
Light
poems on a
summer
night
flash on, flash off --
"Hold me
tight!"
That's a lovely contribution, Tricia. I have to say that this stretch produced some great results, from silly to sublime. Nicely done, everyone!
ReplyDeleteOnce again I'm delighted that this new verse form evoked so much interest and effort. Thanks, Tricia, for your nifty contribution. And a bow to all for joining in the spirit of the zeno.
ReplyDeleteThese are harder than they look!!
ReplyDeleteI actually wrote one that I *think* follows all the rules -- it's about my ongoing love affair with Richard Peck. It's the best kind of affair - the kind he knows nothing about.
I have two places to look for trying out that poetry stretch form, "zeno"
ReplyDeleteSchool: http://maclibrary.wordpress.com/?p=39
Personal: http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/10/30/playing-with-the-zeno-poetry-form/
Thanks for stretching us!