The challenge this week was to write in the form of reverso. Here are the results.
Harriet of spynotes shares a poem entitled Tafelmusik.
Heart To hear Is A small shift With a flick of the bow, Like two sine waves crossing, At once Coming together and Flying apart, A duet. | A duet Flying apart, Coming together and, At once, Like two sine waves crossing With a flick of the bow, A small shift Is To hear Heart. |
Julie Larios of The Drift Record shared this poem.
It’s a neat trick, This slick reversal: Can I handle The movement, the tick to tock, the click to clack of it, the back to back - I mean, the down to up? I love the frown-to-smile of it, The way that Singer sang it. I’ll try it. | I’ll try it the way that Singer sang it: I love the frown-to-smile of it - I mean, the down to up, the back to back, the click to clack of it, the movement, the tick to tock. Can I handle this slick reversal? It’s a neat trick. |
Pat (is that you Mr. Lewis?) left a poem entitled Nicholas Needham: Book Head-Case and Bookcase Head.
You can read him like a book Nicholas Needham—take a look: As he grew a book-case head For he read and read and read He would need ‘em through the years Bookmark nose and bookend ears Grew enormous bookworm eyes Nicholas Needham, child-size, Barely three feet from the floor Sprouted up and read some more Lucky, as a little weed, Nicholas Needham learned to read. | Nicholas Needham learned to read Lucky, as a little weed, Sprouted up and read some more Barely three feet from the floor Nicholas Needham, child-size, Grew enormous bookworm eyes Bookmark nose and bookend ears He would need ‘em through the years For he read and read and read As he grew a book-case head Nicholas Needham—take a look: You can read him like a book. |
Nicole Marie Schreiber shares a poem entitled A Look in the Mirror.
With pen in hand, still I stand, all astonishment, as my reflection speaks. “You are a writer?” “No.” I shake my head. It all means nothing. Fingers aching. Pages blanking. Words not flying, Stories dying. Such a sham. I’m not a real writer. I am false. | False. I am a real writer. I’m not such a sham. Stories dying, words not flying, pages blanking, fingers aching… it all means nothing. I shake my head. “No! You are a writer!" speaks my reflection, as all astonishment, still l stand, with pen in hand. |
Kate Coombs of BookAunt shared two poems!
If it rains the sun will bow her head like a yellow flower and blue will turn gray, night seep into day. All will be mysterious. | All will be mysterious— night seep into day and blue will turn gray. Like a yellow flower the sun will bow her head if it rains. |
Once upon a time a boy set out on a quest. He crossed mountains. He forded rivers. He sought his fortune. He met an old man— he was given an amulet. He asked a question: He spoke to the sun. He spoke to the moon. His way was long... He grew strong. | He grew strong. His way was long. He spoke to the moon. He spoke to the sun. He asked a question— he was given an amulet. He met an old man. He sought his fortune. He forded rivers. He crossed mountains. A boy set out on a quest once upon a time. |
Mary Lee of A Year of Reading took a quote and turned it into a reverso.
Jone of Deo Writer shares a library/book inspired reverso.
Carol Weis shares a poem entitled Scorching Spring.
Soaring temperatures Accelerates blossoms Scorches spring Rips off t-shirts Tosses on shorts Heat | Heat Tosses on shorts Rips off t-shirts Scorches spring Accelerates blossoms Soaring temperatures |
M.F. Atkins of World of Words shares a reverso for spring.
It's not too late if you still want to play. Leave me a note about your poem and I'll add it to the list.
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ReplyDeleteLet me try this commenting thing again. :-)
ReplyDeleteCriminy, but my hat is off to Marilyn Singer. After scritching and scratching I only came up with one I call
Epitath/Reverso Curse
Epitath:
Uncle!
I cry
Over you
Reverso Curse:
Over you
I cry
Uncle!
Thank you Tricia, for these weekly challenges and themn posting. This was fun.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea and devilishly tricky to do.
ReplyDeleteYou can see my initial efforts at http://thehittingtheroadagainblues.blogspot.com/2010/04/reversos.html
Please feel free to add them if you wish.
Bob Hale
Oh, how fun! They're all wonderful. I like Greg's, too.
ReplyDeleteI love love love this book.
These are astounding.
ReplyDeleteHere's my start:
ReplyDelete"How do you do
Mirror Mirror?"
Mirror, Mirror:
"How do you do?"
The title of that one is:
ReplyDeleteOde to Marilyn Singer
I am a preschool teacher that discovered Mirror Mirror at the local library. I decided to give the genre a try, hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteBattle of the Sexes
Battle of the Sexes
Girl fighting the masses,
What a struggle. Oh!
Boy, he grows into the crown.
Is the one who knocks,
The Man.
The Man is the one.
Who knocks?
The crown he grows into.
Oh boy!
What a struggle.
Fighting the masses?
Girl!
Battle of the Sexes