To write a haiku, you might go for a walk in a city park, a meadow, the zoo. Put all your senses on full alert. Watch. Listen. Imagine that what you are seeing or smelling or hearing has never been seen, smelled, or heard before--and may never be again. Now take a picture of it--but only with your words.
The best haiku make you think and wonder for a longer than it takes to say them. I've always loved that last line.
Here's one of the haiku from the book I still think about, especially when I'm at the beach.
Frantic sandpiper
high tides erasing
her footnotes
Poem ©J. Patrick Lewis. All rights reserved.
I hope you'll write some haiku with me this week. I'm thinking a lot about summer's demise and the beginning of fall, so that's where my poems seem to be going. Please share a link to your poem or the poem itself in the comments.
child stands on one foot, then
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shape of a school bus
days still blaze but nights
turn cool, touching our skin
with hints of winter
thunderstorms of summer
now storms of fall, practicing
for hurling red leaves
—Kate Coombs, 2013
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THREE O’ CLOCK
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Peck at pumpernickel bread –
Mid-afternoon snack.
BIRD BRAINED
Warbler’s golden notes
Chip away at my slumber –
Nature’s alarm clock.
(C)Charles Waters 2013 all rights reserved.
Written earlier in April:
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If no one can hear
A tree falling in the woods,
Does anyone care?
If the chicken dies
Crossing a busy roadway
What about those eggs?
If we eat those eggs,
What happens to the question
Of which thing comes first?
Who is the most changed
During the process of birth,
The mother or child?
Does a period
End all of life’s sentences,
Or just a comma?
©2013 Jane Yolen all rights reserved
FALL
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so the leaves change colors and
fall, fall, fall, fall, fall
Copyright © 2013 Anastasia Suen All Rights Reserved.