I still find it hard to believe that we are rushing headlong towards the end of the year. I have papers to grade, cookies to bake, packages to mail, cards to send, and more. I am counting the days until my mom arrives (2!), grades are due (8 and 10 respectively), my sister's birthday (13), and public schools close for winter break (11).
In the midst of this year-end chaos, I am acutely aware of time, how little I have and how much I need. So, for this week's stretch I propose we write about time, in any form, in any of it's incarnations. Leave me a note about your poem and I'll post the results here later this week.
In the midst of this year-end chaos, I am acutely aware of time, how little I have and how much I need. So, for this week's stretch I propose we write about time, in any form, in any of it's incarnations. Leave me a note about your poem and I'll post the results here later this week.
FIRST NIGHT HOME
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By Steven Withrow
Your first night home
I couldn't sleep, it was like
a small moon had drifted
through an open window
and settled in our room,
complicating gravity.
For weeks we let you
doze off in your swing,
rock-a-bye, lullaby,
pretty pendulum baby.
One night I napped
on the couch near you,
dreaming to the click
of your metronome seat.
When I woke the TV clock
told a strange time.
I blundered off the blanket,
sat up waiting, fearful
you'd stopped breathing.
But you scrunched your nose
and fenced your fist
and gravity resumed
and the new moon grew
and turned the earth
and turned the earth
and turned the earth
to welcome you.
©2009 by Steven Withrow
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThat's lovely, Steven.
ReplyDeleteWow - I'm going to be hearing Jim Croce the whole time I work on this one, Tricia ("If I could hold time in a bottle....") Thanks in advance for that. Will post as soon as I've got something.
Well done, Steven. I love your poem.
ReplyDeleteTricia,
I wrote a time poem in my head while taking my shower this morning. I think I need to tweak it a bit in places before it's ready for posting.
Hope you had a grand Thanksgiving!
That poem is lovely, Steven. I am cheating this week and posting a poem I wrote a few months ago. This theme made me think of it immediately. This is actually the first poem I had written in a very long time and was largely inspired by the poetry stretches here that I was, at the time, still too nervous about attempting.
ReplyDelete6:45 a.m.
I wake when the sun pries through the curtain gap
to unmask me in the quiet and not-quite dark.
Fifteen minutes before everyone is out of bed
and milling around the kitchen
and looking for a banana or a signature or a hug or a cup of coffee.
Fifteen minutes, and I am willing
my dreams to stay in my head,
hands pressed over eyes:
the adventurous dreams
where the fate of the world
lies on my capable shoulders
in a thousand different places
plus one.
the peaceful dreams
where there is only one small and quiet thing,
Fifteen minutes to remember things of importance
and things of no importance
at all.
Kneading hands and feet
willing wrists, ankles back to life,
words thunder past,
spiral out my ears,
form a cloud around my still-pillowed head.
make breakfast make a phone call make noise make love
make a nuisance of yourself
make hay while the sun shines
pack lunch pack a bag pack a snack for later
back to work back to back back in the USSR on the radio
turn it up turn it down turn left at the second light turn around
and turn around and turn around again but don’t turn back
Definitely not back.
Drive to work drive to the store drive yourself to distraction
Where was I going?
Once upon a time,
in spring I would hurl back the covers
my feet hitting the floor
before my eyes were open
running to grab the world and
a box of cereal that might,
if I were really lucky,
hold a prize like a ring or a car or a million dollars or a pony.
The early bird always did get the worm in the spring.
At least it did then.
In winter, I am less agile.
But still, I share a morning dance in the bathroom
with my four-year-old self
and a toothbrush microphone,
surprised at the face staring back from somewhere past forty
while snow falls past the window over my shoulder
and snow falls past the window past my ear
and snow falls past the window
too fast
and too deep
to measure.
take a memo take an aspirin take a number take your time
take the dog for a walk take the money and run
take a message for someone too busy to answer the phone
take five take a seat take a bath take a hike
take something you need
take it now take it now take it.
Then give it away.
Or,
maybe,
save it for later.
Later, when you remember:
Where was I going?
And you remember:
the way to get there is
to put your feet on the floor
one
at
a
time.
The rest?
It will be carried along
on the tide of mornings.
The sun is up.
And so are you.
The Extra Five Days
ReplyDeleteThree hundred sixty degrees in a circle
any circle
a circle the size of my eye
a circle the size of the sun
Three hundred sixty-five days in a year
any year
any year except a leap year
a year like the year I was born
Five degrees, five days difference
or maybe six
five nights of sleeping, five days of being,
doing and being and counting
I come around
and come around
and come around and leap
and somehow the wheel of my year
keeps five days ahead of a circle
~Heidi Mordhorst
These are so good! Here's mine.
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Something passed this way,
blurring the snow with its feet.
The tracks are dotted
with scraps—bits of tinsel,
gift wrap, even the curved
gold shards of a broken
ornament like a cracked sun.
The footprints are shadows,
blues eddying toward
a great door made of stone
that ends the white sameness.
It is colder than snow
to the touch, and heavy,
but I drag it open,
scraping the shape
of a single wing before
I walk into next year.
--Kate Coombs (Book Aunt), 2009
SPACE AND TIME IN MIND
ReplyDeleteSpace and time balance their beauty in my mind.
Ocean waves I'm watching intently
plan their crests and break upon the beach where God and I are mapping our future.
Sunlight rests upon our world oblivious to its wars and so for a time I forget why we fight.
Treasured moments suspend the universe in space and give labourers precious time to heal.
Generous portions of distance and duration equalise within my mind as the story of life unfolds.
I'm here to help I suppose,
I'll find a way before I die
To serve the Lord with space and time in mind.
[Michael Coldham-Fussell, copyright 2009]
Father Time
ReplyDeleteWhen once begun
And on his own,
He stopped for none
And ran alone.
Time took his time.
Days’ ends ahead
Left nights to climb
Into Time’s bed.
The watch and clock
We’ve come to know—
Tick-tock, tick-tock—
Precisely show
That Time this time
Should take a bow,
Still in his prime—
The here and now.
The hour survives,
The minute ends.
Time alters lives
That time transcends.
My poem this week was inspired by watching my son.
ReplyDeleteOn the day you joined this world
sand in the hourglass of life
began to drop
to the empty bottom,
stacking grain upon grain
until a small hill emerged.
That hill grows still and,
unable to flip the glass
(oh how I wish I could!),
I long to narrow the neck,
slow the march of time
that steals innocence and
propels you to adulthood.
I'm loving the poems this week! Here's mine:
ReplyDeleteI want to write a manifesto about time.
I will scrawl it, bright red, on a dusty concrete wall
While sirens sing in the distance.
I’ve done my time in the trenches
Labor. Dirty diapers. Mommy and Me. PTC.
All the tedious seconds buzzing around me.
I had fun, but time flies.
I want to write a manifesto about time.
I will shout it on a busy corner
While people hurry past, eyes sliding past me.
Time is money
And I want to spend some on myself.
I want to indulge myself with hours and hours of poetry.
I want to squander minutes,
Let them run through my fingers and onto the page.
I want to write a manifesto about time.
I will chant it with a crowd of protesters
While we march toward the Capitol.
Ah, but time marches, too.
It has marched me past
Baby teeth and first days of school
And popsicle stick art projects
Even when I have wanted to stand still.
I want to write a manifesto about time.
I will whisper it over you
While you sleep in your quilted cave.
Soon enough, I will have time on my hands.
Until then, I can stitch out some time for myself.
I can hide it in the corners of my day,
So that it won’t take away from
The best of times:
The time I spend with you.
Easter
Tricia--
ReplyDeleteNot sure my following poem fits into the poetry "time" theme stretch this week.
Here's a version of a poem I wrote many years ago. It's about my favorite time of the day when my daughter was little. Sara would sit on my lap on the red-cushioned rocking chair in an alcove of my bedroom as I read to her from her favorite picture books. I miss those times.
A Book and a Chair
A book and a chair
Are nice to share
When the edges of day
Are melting away
Into the night.
A book and a chair
Are nice to share
Touching and talking
Reading and rocking
Into the night.
One I wrote just after David died, but seems appropriate to this stretch. Not sure it will format.
ReplyDeleteSitting Down to Eat
How many times did we sit down to eat
And you refused the offering?
One time, ten times, a hundred times,
Your mouth sore, your stomach drawn in on itself,
The cancer like some tin-hat dictator
Forbidding you your life. How many times?
How many times did I make soup, straining it
In the blender: tomato, apple, butternut squash,
Sweetening it to tempt you, decorating the dish.
There was nothing I would not try,
Even buying a second blender to be readyShould you want to eat again. How many times?
Each spoonful a victory, I cozened you
As if you were a reluctant child, begging,
Singing, telling you tales, the old choo-choo,
Spoon chugging into your mouth.
I did not go quite that far, but would have,
Had I thought it would work, many times.
And on the last day, though we didn’t know it
Till after, you ate an extra spoonful, winked
At your son. We didn’t say a word, not one,
So astonished, we took it for a sign
You were on the mend, relaxed our guard,
And you slipped away. No more time.
c 2009 Jane Yolen
Thank you Tricia. This gave me a chance to write about a friend going through chemo.
ReplyDeleteCAPTURED IN TIME
for Renee
I got her bald-headed
picture sent to my
inbox last week
her face smiling
brilliantly
as tears rush
down mine
a rampage
tumbles
across
cheeks
spills
over
chin
splashes
onto
chest.
Two months
of chemo
captured
in time.
© Carol Weis. All rights reserved.
My first grandchild is due in May. This poem is for her.
ReplyDeleteTo My Unborn Grandchild
It wasn’t so long ago
that your daddy
was a baby—
my baby
Even before he was born
I knew I would love him
forever.
From the first time
the nurse placed
your daddy in my arms
I wished he would stay little,
forever.
I wanted to watch him sleep
and read him stories
and touch his tiny toes
and listen to his first words
forever.
Only love lasts
forever—
babies grow up
much too fast
and soon your daddy
became a young man,
a young man
who dreamed of a baby
of his own.
Now he’s waiting
for you to arrive—
so he can watch you sleep
and read you stories
and touch your tiny toes
and listen to your first words.
He already knows
he’ll love you
forever
and
so will I.
Love, Grandma
I'm posting this a second time because I noticed a mistake.That's what I get for writing it right here in the comment section instead of cut and pasting. : )
ReplyDeleteMy first grandchild is due in May. This poem is for her.
To My Unborn Grandchild
It wasn’t so long ago
that your daddy
was a baby—
my baby
Even before he was born
I knew I would love him
forever.
From the first time
the nurse placed
your daddy in my arms
I wished he would stay little,
forever.
I wanted to watch him sleep
and read him stories
and touch his tiny toes
and listen to his first words
forever.
But only love
lasts forever—
babies grow up
much too fast
and soon your daddy
became a young man,
a young man
who dreamed of a baby
of his own.
Now he’s waiting
for you to arrive—
so he can watch you sleep
and read you stories
and touch your tiny toes
and listen to your first words.
He already knows
he’ll love you
forever
and
so will I.
Love, Grandma