Monday, November 30, 2015

Monday Poetry Stretch - Gogyohka

Gogyohka (go-gee-yo-ka) is  a verse form that was developed in Japan by Enta Kusakabe. It is meant to be a freer verse form than the tanka. A gogyohka is a five line poem in which each line is comprised of a single phrase.

You can learn more about this form and read some examples at Ben Johnson Poetry FormsGogyohka (5-Line Poetry) and Writer's Digest.

I hope you'll join me this week in writing a gogyohka. Please share a link to your poem or the poem itself in the comments.

6 comments:


  1. Waisting Away: a Gogyohka


    I wasted
    a mind
    and now
    I mind
    a waist.


    A personal
    choice
    and surely
    a personal
    taste.


    Some would say
    I 've changed
    my body's
    vast
    menu.


    I think
    I've only
    changed its
    shrinking
    venue.

    ©2015 Jane Yolen all rights reserved

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  2. Three Thanksgiving Gogyohka

    Two-year-old
    dances by
    skitters
    and hops
    like a little bug


    My brother and I
    catch each other’s eye
    and smile
    remembering
    everything together


    Thanksgiving evening
    the tablecloth
    bare
    its fall leaves
    touched by gravy

    —Kate Coombs, 2015
    all rights reserved

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  3. Especially love that last verse, Kate.

    Jane

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    1. Thanks, Jane! I had a waist once, too. :)

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  4. MOOD SWINGS
    I don’t know which side
    Of life’s pendulum
    Will tinge my soul today,
    Yet I know, to quote my father,
    “It will all turn out okay.”

    (c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.

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