Friday, August 30, 2024

Poetry Sisters Write Ekphrastic Poems

At least once yearly, we challenge ourselves to write poems to photographs or works of art. I love writing to the shared images and rarely choose my own, but this time, I did.

In early August, I spent time at the National D-Day Memorial and was struck by the replica of the sculpture “Le Monument aux Morts.” The original stands in Trevieres, France. Erected in 1921, it was intended as a memorial to men from the town who died in WWI. In 1944, it was damaged during the battle for Normandy. The town decided not to repair it as a reminder of the damages of war and the fragility of peace.



I chose 6 words from the plaque describing the statue. Those words are: second, history, memory, soil, face, and war. I wrote the first stanza using them in the order I found them and then rearranged them to write this sestina.

Echoes of War

Standing at her feet, I think for a second
of the tragedies of modern history
hiding in our collective memory
we know horrors are buried in the soil
it’s a past we cannot face
yet we’re still a world at war

We are burdened by weapons of war
firearms the leading cause of death in youth, seconds
change lives, scars etched upon their faces
mass shootings not just history
but present on our soil
Columbine, Sandy Hook, Uvalde—names burned in our memory

Their epitaph reads “in memoriam”
we lose in peace and war
on home and foreign soil
our first sons and daughters, our second,
and third, changing family histories
sorrow written on every mourner’s face

On its face
loss becomes a memory
a blip in our history
not a game this tug of war
we have no time to lose, not one second
we must nurture our fertile soil

From this earth, this very soil,
we rise to comfort every weary face
time’s healing touch felt with each passing second
old wounds begin to fade from memory
planting hope in bodies ravaged by war
softening the edges of this cancerous history

Pages turned in the book of human history,
hold lessons learned, deeply buried in the soil
when Earth shook under the weight of war
its narrative shaping humanity’s face
we hold the lost in our memory
honor them each passing second

We make history as we face the future
fragile peace holding on our soil, the memory
of war fading for the briefest of seconds

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

You can find the poems shared by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

    Would you like to try the next challenge? In September, we’re using Wallace Stevens Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird as a model for looking at something in different ways. We might settle on 7 or 4 or 12 ways. Looking deeply and differently are the keys here. Are you with us? Good! You have a month to craft your creation and share it on September 27th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

    This week, Susan Thomsen of Chicken Spaghetti is hosting Poetry Friday. I hope you'll take some time to check out all the poetic things being shared today. Happy Poetry Friday, friends! 

    12 comments:

    1. it’s a past we cannot face
      yet we’re still a world at war

      Isn't that the truth.
      I love that monument's scars and your liberal use of them as metaphor. Collectively, we are unable to face things and the sorrow written on our faces is real and true. Thanks for sharing this.

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    2. Such a powerful poem! I can feel your passion and the deepness of your feelings.

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    3. Tricia, a sestina is a big challenge. I love the intensity in your lines. You handled those six words, like a pro.

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    4. "we know horrors are buried in soil"--wow, yes!

      I once wrote a picture book using Wallace Stevens structure. It has never sold, but I still really love it. Maybe it will sell one day.

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    5. That realization - "we're still a world at war" - it's such a sobering thought, that while specific wars may have ended and been relegated to the history books, war is a constant, raging in countries all around the world, all throughout history, right into the present day.

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    6. I am grateful to know of that statue, Tricia, and all that it has endured, along with soldiers fighting for our freedom. Still at war, yes, and your ending is gripping: "war fading for the briefest of seconds".

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    7. Your sestina aches with sorrow, Tricia. And I can't help but read it mournfully with this morning's news of the latest hostage deaths..."its narrative shaping humanity's face."

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    8. Tricia, this poem hits me hard. So many worries are these are front-line worries for educators. I love that you found words from the plaque to begin. These lines that repeat the word, "face" are effective. I'm hoping I can tap into joy as resistance this school year. These issues have weighed on me so heavily.

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    9. So powerful. Especially that final stanza.

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    10. Tricia, your poem moved me. I thought of various wars when reading trying to understand why these wars occur.Thanks for the touch of hope.
      "planting hope in bodies ravaged by war
      softening the edges of this cancerous history"

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    11. Oh, this poem, Tricia. It brings me to my knees, the way that human history repeats itself. Thank you for writing this...

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    12. Oh, Tricia, what a strong and powerful piece. And on the day I'm reading this (Wed., the 4th), another school shooting has happened in Georgia. When will humanity learn to be human?

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