This month the challenge was to write in the style of Taylor Mali. If you've ever seen the video
What Do Teacher's Make, you know who he is. Mali is largely a spoken word poet. When you read
his print poems, they are long and recursive. I wasn't sure I'd be able to pull off a poem like this, so I went to his
Writing Exercises page and found a poem on the
Rhyme Time Lesson that I thought would be good to emulate. The directions were to use his poem as a model, and then write about "thoughts, memories, fears, joys, and mostly OBJECTS that generally fill your head each day." His model poem is really a list poem. I didn't follow his directions exactly, but I'm not too far off.
Insomnia Brain Remembers
When I can’t sleep at night and my brain won’t shut down
I feel like a tourist in memory town
Remembering people, places, and more
Reliving the bits that will not be ignored
My grandmother Stohr in her yellow housecoat
The day I was published for something I wrote
My father’s wry wit, my mother’s quick laugh
The first time my son fed a captive giraffe
The day that my sister packed up and moved out
The first job after college that filled me with doubt
The yellow VW owned by my brother
The last day in June when I lost my mother
The mountains, Tibet, and the glorious view
Sundays in church on a hard wooden pew
The first day of school when I started to teach
The jar of treats grandma kept high out of reach
The winter the dog was found caught in a trap
Charting our trips on an unfolded map
Try too hard to rest and it all rushes back
But I’ve lived and been loved, so there’s nothing I lack
(only sleep!)
Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2022. All rights reserved.
You can read the pieces written by my Poetry Sisters at the links below.
Would you like to try the next challenge? Next month we are writing poems using the words or theme of string/thread/rope/chain. We hope you'll join us. Are you in? Good! You’ve got a month to craft your creation(s), then share your offering with the rest of us on May 27th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!
In addition to today's Poetry Sister collaboration, I'm close to wrapping up my National Poetry Month where I'm writing poems in Japanese poetic forms to primary sources. Today's poem is written to a family photo. I'm also sharing these poems on my Instagram in case you want to see them all in one place.
I do hope you'll take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Jone MacCulloch. Happy poetry Friday friends.