Friday, August 28, 2026

Poetry Sisters Write Haiku Sonnets

Our challenge this month was to write a haiku sonnet. A haiku sonnet combines the syllable count and three-line stanzaic structure of the English haiku with the fourteen-line structure of the sonnet. You can learn more about the form at Writer's Digest and at Astra Poetica.

I used two different poems as mentor poems. The first was Birds Punctuate the Days by Joyce Clement. The second was Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird by Wallace Stevens. My first thought was to marry the ideas in Joyce Clement's poem to those in May Swenson's Cardinal Ideograms. This was much harder than I thought it would be, largely because I didn't want my imagery to copy those created by Clement. I then pivoted to writing haiku that related to summer giving way to fall, using Stevens' poem as a guide for ways of seeing/observation.

In the end, I drafted two poems. 


Avian Ideograms: A Haiku Sonnet
   -inspired by Joyce Clement’s “Birds Punctuate the Days”

great blue heron
a question mark in the reeds
the pond answers first

chimney swift
an airborne parenthesis
nothing held inside

downy woodpecker
an exclamation on the bark
the tree keeps silent

house wren
an apostrophe among leaves
the branch becomes a line

birds reshape the sky
as skies reshape birds


August, Four Ways: A Haiku Sonnet

tomatoes hang red
among the yellowing leaves
one blossom opens

cicadas pulse on
silence widens between songs
the whole tree trembles

garden in full bloom
the long shadow of an oak
reaches past the gate

a red dogwood leaf
drifts slowly on the creek
green swells along the banks

no day knows where it ends
or where the next begins

Poems ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2026. All rights reserved.

You can read the poems my Poetry Sisters have written at the links below.

Would you like to try the next challenge? Our prompt for September comes from Colby Sharp in THE CREATIVITY PROJECT (p.257): "It was all my fault." Write a poem that uses this idea or these words or anything that this sentence makes you think of. You’ve got a month to craft your creation(s), then share your offering with the rest of us on September 25th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems! 

I hope you'll take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Mona Voelkel. Happy Poetry Friday all!  

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