A rondel is a variation of the roundeau. In the book A Kick in the Head: An Everyday Guide to Poetic Forms, Paul Janeczko calls it a roundel and defines it this way.
A roundel is a three-stanza poem of 11 lines. The stanzas have four, three, and four lines in them and a rhyme scheme of abab bab abab. Ah, but there's more. Line 4 is repeated as line 11 -- not an easy trick!
Here is a roundel about a roundel.
The RoundelWill you join us this week in writing a roundel? Leave me a comment about your poem and I will post the results later this week. Happy writing!
By Algernon Charles Swinburne
A roundel is wrought as a ring or a starbright sphere,
With craft of delight and with cunning of sound unsought,
That the heart of the hearer may smile if to pleasure his ear
A roundel is wrought.
Its jewel of music is carven of all or of aught--
Love, laughter, or mourning--remembrance of rapture or fear--
That fancy may fashion to hang in the ear of thought.
As a bird's quick song runs round, and the hearts in us hear
Pause answer to pause, and again the same strain caught,
So moves the device whence, round as a pearl or tear,
A roundel is wrought.
I like this one. I'm working on mine.
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You can view my attempt at http://dianemdavis.livejournal.com/49585.html.
ReplyDeleteI'll have to try this again sometime, and spend more time on it. it's fun to work to a problem. The more complicated the better.
diane
I can't believe I finally got this one! Thank you for the challenge - turns out I needed to get this out.
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I've posted mine today for Friday Poetry. Had to sweat a little over it!
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