I was going through an old poetry notebook last week and found some notes on double dactyls, along with attempts at the form. I've come across a few words lately that sound like they belong in a double dactyl, so this seems like a good time to have another go at this one.
What is a dactyl you ask? A dactyl is a foot in a line of poetry that contains three syllables, one stressed followed by two unstressed (/ _ _ ).
A double dactyl poem consists of two quatrains that follow these guidelines:
1 - double dactyl nonsense phrase (like Higgeldy Piggeldy)
2 - double dactyl of a person's name
3 - double dactyl
4 - one dactyl plus a stressed syllable (/ _ _ / )
5 - double dactyl
6 - double dactyl
7 - double dactyl
8 - one dactyl plus a stressed syllable (/ _ _ / )
Here are some other helpful notes.
- Somewhere in the second stanza is a double dactyl formed by a single word (usually).
- The last lines of the quatrains (4 and 8) must rhyme.
- Like the clerihew, these are generally written about famous people and are meant to be humorous.
Phew! I hope this makes sense to you. Writing it in this way helps me to see what the poem should sound like. Here is an example.
Higgledy-Piggledy
Hans Christian Andersen
Wrote of a mermaid who
Swam up on shore.
There she became somewhat
Less than amphibious;
Drowned in the sea-foam 'mid
Morals galore.
If my notes aren't helpful, you can find a description of double dactyls at Poetry Base and Everything2.com.
I hope you'll join me this week in writing a double dactyl (or two) . Please share a link to your poem or the poem itself in the comments.
Lady G
ReplyDeleteHere again, there again,
combing her hair again,
Lady Godiva went
riding through town.
Leofric’s taxes were
levied most maximus
till his wife’s nakedness
brought them back down.
—Kate Coombs, 2015
LOL to both of yours. I wrote this a while ago:
ReplyDeleteEmily Dickinson: A Double Dactyl
Higgledy-Piggledy
Emily Dickinson
Dressed all in white while she
Eschewed all prose.
Scribbling poems that
Nobody would publish
That all could be sung to
The tune “Yellow Rose.”
©2015 Jane Yolen all rights reserved
Ha! Perfect. And Abe too.
DeleteHiggledy-Piggledy
ReplyDeleteAbraham Lincoln, he
Kept us a nation
But gave up his life,
Taking a box
in a theater and thinking
Twas the best could do for
His so crazy wife.
©2015 Jane Yolen all rights reserved
Honkedy-Gronkedy,
ReplyDeleteMother Goose riding
Upon a good rhyme
with political ease.
Giving us children
Our first look at poetry,
steering that goose
with a squeeze of her knees.
©2015 Jane Yolen all rights reserved
They are compelling. Like potato chips.
Oh, "Honkedy-Gronkedy"--so goose-ish!
DeleteTHE CHAIRMAN OF THE BOARD
ReplyDeleteHoboken, Hoboken
Francis Sinatra
Thin as a beanstalk,
Strong as a tank,
Melodious vocals
Blueeyedpormorphically
Had Bobby-soxers screaming
His nickname, “Frank!”
(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.
MOTHER MONSTER
ReplyDeleteHumina Humina
Lady of Gaga
Freakishly dressed up
No matter what day
Like fellow monsters
Artpopamorphically
A chameleon of style
She was born that way.
(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.