I love the poems of William Carlos Williams. Inspired by his work and Joyce Sidman's book This is Just to Say: Poems of Apology and Forgiveness, I thought it would be fun to write poems of apology this week.
Here's my poem for my sister. I must confess--it's all true.
First, read This is Just to Say, by William Carlos Williams.For more ideas and examples, read the apology poems at Hands-On Stanzas.
Next, read an example from This is Just to Say: Poems of Apology and Forgiveness.
Now, write your own poem of apology.
Here's my poem for my sister. I must confess--it's all true.
So, do you want to play? What kind of poem will you write? Leave a comment about your poem and I'll post the results later this week.For SusanI came in after playing
in the sandbox and woods,
tired and dirty,
and left a trail of bugs and sticks
on your side of the room.
I spilled poppy red
on the floor
and quietly erased any trace of it,
then claimed not to know
where your favorite polish was.
I used watercolors
to create beautiful pictures,
not meaning to go beyond
the borders of the paper,
and painted your brand new bedspread.
Forgive me for being
an annoying little sister.
I hope I'm better now.
Tricia,
ReplyDeleteI posted the following original apology and response poems at Blue Rose Girls earlier this year along with a review of Joyce Sidman's poetry book.
Here's the URL for that post:
http://bluerosegirls.blogspot.com/2007/03/poetry-friday-this-is-just-to-say.html
By Elaine Magliaro
This Is Just to Say: A Poem to My Daughter
I have eaten
the chocolate bunny
I bought you
for Easter
a big-eared, brown hunk
of deliciousness
you probably saw
hidden
in the closet
and were expecting
to unwrap and savor
on a flower-filled Sunday
Forgive me
it was bittersweet
and creamy
and melted in my mouth
like snow
on the first warm day
of Spring.
A Daughter’s Response to Her Sweets-loving Mother
Mom! How could you???
You know
I love chocolate, too!
You’re an adult
and should have better control
of your candy cravings.
Set an example
for your only child
who also has
a significant sweet tooth.
Next year,
open your wallet a little wider
and buy two bittersweet bunnies
so we can rhapsodize
in a duet
of ooohhhs and uuummmms
and indulge
in our chocolate Easter dreams
together
Thanks, Elaine. This is marvelous!
ReplyDeleteAm I allowed to post a belated apology limerick I wrote a few months ago? If so, here it is: Belated Apology
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Mad Kane
Miss R.,
ReplyDeleteCece and I have written apology poems for you.
Here's mine:
http://riddleburger.wordpress.com/2007/11/20/sorry-its-a-poem-for-miss-rumphiuss-apology-poetry-challenge/
and here's Cece's two:
http://riddleburger.wordpress.com/2007/11/21/sorry-its-ceces-poems-for-miss-rumphius/
Tricia:
ReplyDeleteNo apologies needed. I can still so clearly see the stain on that bedspread and the look on your face.
I would gladly give up a thousand bedspreads for all that came before and since.
Susan