Friday, April 28, 2023

Poetry Sisters Write in the Style of Neruda

This month's challenge was to write in the style of Neruda. Oh boy. I haven't read much Neruda, so finding a poem as a mentor text was hard. I was familiar with the bilingual, illustrated selection of Neruda's Book of Questions that was published by Enchanted Lion Books last year. I thought about writing a poem composed of questions, but I went down the rabbit hole of reading Neruda's odes and got lost. They're pretty amazing. If you haven't read them, the best way to describe them is a lengthy (usually) stream of consciousness about everyday objects with a hefty dose of meandering seemingly off-topic before brilliantly closing with a meditation on beauty, nature, or something else profound.

Inspired by these odes, I attempted one of my own. Our theme for the year is transformation. I'm not sure I got there this time, but I had fun trying.

Ode to a Basket of Trinkets

Woven coils 
of colorful paper
form a wide
round bowl
letters 
clearly visible
one can 
imagine 
the stories
they told
In their
present form
transformed into
this bowl
they hold
memories
trinkets
baubles 
no one
but me
can love
I cannot bear
to part
with small
forgotten 
treasures
I worry them 
in my hand
bringing the
ghosts of
love, loss
to life
memories clear
and cloudy
hanging by
a thread
I worry 
over them
wonder when
they'll 
disappear
each trinket 
a touchstone
an exercise
in remembering
and forgetting
a pink diaper pin
once mine
mother kept
it in her 
jewelry box
a fountain pen 
ink cartridge
the bane of
my left-handed
existence
I'm not 
cool enough
or adept enough
to write
without smudging
the ink
my hand
the paper
a Scrabble tile
one puzzle piece
Mardi Gras beads
tiny paper dolls
a frayed Girl Scout badge
three wheat pennies
a wooden nickel
all fleeting
beautiful
reminders of 
the me I 
used to be
and the ones
who made me
who 
I am

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

You can read the pieces written by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

    Would you like to try the next challenge? Next month we are writing in the form of the ghazal. You can learn more about this form here. We hope you'll join us. Are you in? Good! You’ve got a month to craft your creation(s), then share your offering with the rest of us on May 26th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

    I hope you'll take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Ruth at There is no such thing as a God-forsaken town. Happy poetry Friday, friends! 

    Friday, April 14, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 14

    My poem for Day 14 of National Poetry Month is written to the illustration Sowing and Reaping in Frank Leslie's Illustrated Newspaper, (1863 May 23), p. 141. The poem focuses on the right side of the image.


    The Richmond Bread Riot
    April 1, 1863

    In the third spring of the war
    a nation of farmers
    was starving

    hungry women took the lead
    took to the streets
    wielding  clubs and knives
    axes and hatchets

    they marched on
    the Governor's mansion
    discontent, angry

    quiet determination turned
    to chaos as chants of
    "Bread or blood!"
    echoed through the streets

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams
    April 9 - Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865) 
    April 10 - Detroit Publishing Company photograph of The Main street, Mackinac
    April 11 - Pigeon Message from Major Whittlesey to the Commanding Officer of the 308th Infantry (1918)
    April 12 - Henry Bacon’s Competition Proposal for a Monument to Abraham Lincoln (1912)
    April 13 -  The Johnstown calamity. A slightly damaged house. Pennsylvania Johnstown, 1889

    I hope you'll take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Jone Rush MacCulloch. Happy poetry Friday, friends!

    Thursday, April 13, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 13

    My poem for Day 13 of National Poetry Month is written to the photograph The Johnstown calamity. A slightly damaged house. Pennsylvania Johnstown, 1889.


    The Great Flood of 1889

    When the South Fork Dam gave way
    the Little Conemaugh River ran 
    like the Mississippi
    a flood of water and debris
    hit the unsuspecting town
    fires burned for three days
    it wasn't pretty
    even in stereoscope

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams
    April 9 - Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865) 
    April 10 - Detroit Publishing Company photograph of The Main street, Mackinac
    April 11 - Pigeon Message from Major Whittlesey to the Commanding Officer of the 308th Infantry (1918)
    April 12 - Henry Bacon’s Competition Proposal for a Monument to Abraham Lincoln (1912)

    Wednesday, April 12, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 12

    My poem for Day 12 of National Poetry Month is written to Henry Bacon’s Competition Proposal for a Monument to Abraham Lincoln (1912).


    neoclassical ghosts haunt DC
    triangular pediments, massive columns
    majestic domes
    iconic symbols of democracy

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams
    April 9 - Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865) 
    April 10 - Detroit Publishing Company photograph of The Main street, Mackinac
    April 11 - Pigeon Message from Major Whittlesey to the Commanding Officer of the 308th Infantry (1918)

    Tuesday, April 11, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 11

    My poem for Day 11 of National Poetry Month is written to Pigeon Message from Major Whittlesey to the Commanding Officer of the 308th Infantry (1918).


    battlefield messengers
    of the feathered kind
    braved harsh conditions 
    kept rear commanders informed  
    of enemy movements
    and friendly fire

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams
    April 9 - Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865) 
    April 10 - Detroit Publishing Company photograph of The Main street, Mackinac

    Monday, April 10, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 10

    My poem for Day 10 of National Poetry Month is written to a Detroit Publishing Company photograph of The Main street, Mackinac.


    Main street, 1906
    strung, wired,
    ready to power up

    my insulator collection
    small piece of forgotten history

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams
    April 9 - Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865)

    Sunday, April 09, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 9

    My poem for Day 9 of National Poetry Month is written to the Amnesty Oath of Robert E. Lee (1865)


    After surrender
    he promised to uphold the Constitution
    expressed a desire for reconciliation
    transitioned from treasonous general
    to college president

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886) 
    April 8 - Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams

    Saturday, April 08, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 8

    My poem for Day 8 of National Poetry Month is written to Roy Takeno reading paper in front of office / photograph by Ansel Adams

    Free Press in Manzanar

    There was nothing free
    in this "reception center"
    240 miles from the sea
    in a high-walled mountain valley
    where US citizens
    treated as aliens and enemies
    were interned

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools
    April 7 - Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886)

    Friday, April 07, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 7

    My poem for Day 7 of National Poetry Month is written to a horrific Letter from Governor Ross Supporting Apache Removal (1886). You can read the entire letter in the link.



    They Were Here First

    ghosts of the past
    rattle in the present
    their descendants are here
    strangers in their own land

    targeted by hateful language
    yesterday and today
         traditional enemies
         generations of hostility
         warpath of pillage and murder
         radical measures
         extermination

    no peace except in
    distant and isolated lands

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song
    April 6 - Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools

    I hope you'll take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Margaret Simon at Reflections on the Teche. Happy poetry Friday, friends!

    Thursday, April 06, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 6

    My poem for Day 6 of National Poetry Month is written to Teachers' Monthly Report and Rules (1865): Narrative School Reports from Teachers and Superintendents of Freedmen's Schools. This is a found poem created with words from the Rules.


    Teacher Rules

    value knowledge and
    subjects of instruction 

    notice and observe with 
    special attention
    all pupils

    provide time for learning
    deliver best care in teaching

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman
    April 5 - Sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song

    Wednesday, April 05, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 5

    My poem for Day 5 of National Poetry Month is written to the sheet music cover for Votes for Women: International Suffragists' Song. This is a found poem created with the song's lyrics.


    Votes for Women

    mothers and maids
    foremost toilers of our land
    all answer the call
    marching as one vast army
    liberty under way 

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses
    April 4 - 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman.

    Tuesday, April 04, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 4

    My poem for Day 4 of National Poetry Month is written to a 1917 poster showing Liberty presenting a sword "Service" to a young woman.


    Over There

    more than Uncle Sam
    indelible images 
    posters sold the war 

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card
    April 3 - Section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses

    Monday, April 03, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 3

    My poem for Day 3 of National Poetry Month is written to a section of the city code of Montgomery, Alabama, requiring segregation on buses


    Don't tell me it's not systemic
    Don't try to convince me it's done
    Centuries of brutal oppression
    Need time to be overcome

    Don't tell me the past is divisive
    The facts can't be denied
    We must tell the truth of history
    Honor all who suffered and died

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77 
    April 2 - John Wilkes Booth's calling card

    Sunday, April 02, 2023

    NPM 2023 - Poem 2

    My poem for Day 2 of National Poetry Month is written to John Wilkes Booth's calling card. You can read more about it on the Pieces of History blog.


    April 14, 1865

    in the afternoon
    he played the gentleman 
    observed the niceties of the day
    before he played America's Brutus
    felling The Great Emancipator

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me tomorrow for my next poem highlighting a piece of history. You can read the previous poems as images on Instagram or at the links below. Each one is listed according to the primary source that inspired it.

    April 1 - Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77.

    Saturday, April 01, 2023

    National Poetry Month Project 2023

    Last year for National Poetry Month I wrote poems in a variety of Japanese poetic forms (haiku, tanka, dodoitsu, etc.) to photos, letters, newspaper articles, and other family ephemera. This was my first attempt at using primary sources to write poems.

    This year I'm going back to primary sources, though this time around I'm using pieces from the National Archives and Library of Congress. I am posting the poem and primary source here. You will be able to find a graphic mashup of the poem and primary source on my Instagram.

    My first poem is written to this Sketch map of White Oak Swamp and vicinity southeast of Richmond.]; 6/1862; Records of the Office of the Chief of Engineers, Record Group 77.

    In 1862, this was his world
    a hand-drawn map
    dotted with enemy encampments
    rebel pickets and redoubts

    world turned upside down
    civilization measured in
    miles to Richmond

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

    I hope you'll join me this month for more primary source poems. If you are interested in my previous projects, you can find them linked below.

    2022 - Poems and Primary Sources - For this project, I wrote in Japanese poetic forms to photos, letters, and other ephemera of family history.

    2021 - Found Poems - For this project, I wrote and shared found poems, most of which were science- or nature-themed. 

    2020 - Armchair Traveler - This project highlighted original poems related to places I've been. These were written in response to the COVID lockdown and the desire to be anywhere but home.

    2019 - Original Poems - This project highlighted original poems in a range of forms on a variety of topics.

    2018 - Assorted Poems - This project highlighted a range of poems written by others that I found interesting or inspiring.

    2017 Celebrating My Late Sister-in-Law - On the fifth anniversary of my sister-in-law's death, this project shared memories of her and a poem related to each memory.

    2016 - Celebrations - Inspired by World Rat Day: Poems About Real Holidays You've Never Heard Of (written by J. Patrick Lewis) and The Poetry Friday Anthology for Celebrations: Holiday Poems for the Whole Year in English and Spanish (compiled by Sylvia Vardell and Janet Wong), this project focused on daily, weekly, and monthly celebrations held during the month of April. In addition to information about each celebration, posts highlighted poems, books of poetry, children's books, and more.

    2015 Poetic Forms - This project, entitled Jumping Into Form, examined poetry writing and a variety of poetic forms, while providing a wealth of resources for teachers guiding students in writing poetry of their own.

    2014 Science Poetry Pairings - Inspired by the Book Links article Sylvia Vardell and I co-authored, Nonfiction Monday meets Poetry Friday: Linking Genres, this project highlighted books of poetry (or in some cases very special poems) and their perfect partners.

    2013 Poetry A to Z - In this project, I shared books, poems, poetic forms, and other poetry-inspired topics. Beginning with Z and winding down to A, the posts were a potluck of poetry resources.

    2011 Poetry in the Classroom - In this project, I highlighted a poem, a theme, a book, or a poet each day and suggested ways to make poetry a regular part of life in the classroom. I also suggested companion books, websites, and activities to accompany the reading of selected poems.

    2010 - Poetry Makers - Following on the heels of the 2009 project, I posed a series of questions to 32 different children's poets. I highlighted their answers, along with their work and selected poems.

    2009 Poetry Makers - In this project, I posed a series of questions to 35 children's poets. I highlighted their answers, along with their work and selected poems.

    2008 Poetry in the Classroom - In this project, I highlighted a poetry book or related set of books (on a theme) and described how they might be used in the classroom. I also suggested companion books, websites, and activities to accompany the reading of selected poems from the books. Over the course of the month, I covered 62 books by 39 authors.