In my initial drafts I pretty much failed this challenge as it related to theme, but I did manage a few relative to form. I did write a skinny poem for my mom earlier this week with a reference to spring. You can read it in Monday's post NPM 2020 - From the Window. I did finally sit down to write at least one on point. Here are several offerings.
Skinny 1
I come from
where
mom
knows
best,
where
family’s
first.
Love’s
where
I come from.
Skinny 2
My favorite flowers are
tulips.
Brightly
colored
show-offs,
tulips
herald
spring’s
arrival.
Tulips
are my favorite flowers.
My heart breaks
inside.
Pandemic
isolation
sucks!
Inside
social
distancing,
staying
inside
breaks my heart
You can read the pieces written by my Poetry Sisters at the links below.
- Tanita Davis
- Rebecca Holmes
- Sara Lewis Holmes
- Kelly Ramsdell
- Laura Purdie Salas
- Liz Garton Scanlon
- Andi Sibley
These are wonderful, Tricia. 1 is stunning, but 2 also really resonated, as tulips are my favorite, as well. And were my mom's, so they have extra meaning. And, sadly, I could relate to 3, too. Can you imagine living now without technology connections?
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery of the tulips. And I think you've gotten theme just fine, although I honestly am not sure foresight in this world is even a thing anymore...
ReplyDeleteYour one for your mom is achingly lovely. And I LOVE tulips too---they really don't last at all, but I still love them so much.
ReplyDeleteI love skinny poems, that choosing of the best 'repeating' word, & the weaving around it. Each one's a lovely snapshot, Tricia.
ReplyDeleteThese are delightful - even the one about the pandemic made me smile with its rightness for the times. I didn't know this form but think I'll be playing with it soon.
ReplyDeleteSkinny poems are a fun form to play with. Your first one, for your mom is lovely. The second, about tulips is relatable. And your third, is spot on:
ReplyDelete"Pandemic
isolation
sucks!"
Thanks for sharing these! :)
I love the way a skinny poem can say so much in just a short burst down the page. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWow! These are fabulous. I've tried writing a few skinny poems, and find them so difficult. When they work, they can say so much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteTulips are one of my favorites too. I love the way you combine the show off with the coming of Spring - complex as always!
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