Monday, October 19, 2009

Monday Poetry Stretch - Double Dactyl

A few weeks ago at my poetry workshop I was challenged to write a double dactyl. I still haven't managed to do it, so now I'm giving myself a deadline in the hopes that I'll think of something.

A double dactyl consists of two quatrains in this form:
1 - double dactyl nonsense phrase (like Higgeldy Piggeldy)
2 - double dactyl of a person's name
3 - double dactyl
4 - one dactyl plus a stressed syllable (/ _ _ / )

5 - double dactyl
6 - double dactyl
7 - double dactyl
8 - one dactyl plus a stressed syllable (/ _ _ / )
Here are some other helpful notes.
  • A dactyl contains three syllables, one stressed followed by two unstressed (/ _ _ ).
  • Somewhere in the second stanza is a double dactyl formed by a single word (usually).
  • The last lines of the quatrains (4 and 8) must rhyme.
  • Like the clerihew, these are generally written about famous people and are meant to be humorous.
Phew! I hope this makes sense to you. Writing it in this way helps me to see what the poem should sound like. Here is an example.
Higgledy-Piggledy
Hans Christian Andersen
Wrote of a mermaid who
Swam up on shore.

There she became somewhat
Less than amphibious;
Drowned in the sea-foam 'mid
Morals galore.
If my notes aren't helpful, you can find a description of double dactyls at Poetry Base and Everything2.com.

So, there's your challenge. Write a double dactyl (or two) and leave me a note about your poem. I'll post the results here later this week.

25 comments:

  1. A Midsummer Night's Press published a murder mystery told in 66 consecutive double dactyls:

    THE GOOD-NEIGHBOR POLICY: A DOUBLE-CROSS IN DOUBLE DACTYLS by Charles Ardai

    :-)

    www.amidsummernightspress.com

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  2. Knowledge, Ltd.

    A slight diversion from your rules, Tricia, but here's a double dactyl:

    Higgledy-piggledy,
    Quantumechanical
    Physicist Heisenberg
    Wrote a new Planck,

    Constantly stressed the Un-
    Certainty Principle,
    Leaving some scientists
    Drawing a blank.

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  3. Tricia,

    I posted two double dactyls over at Political Verses last week--one written by me and another written by Julie Larios. Neither includes the name of a famous individual. Here are the URLs:

    http://politicalverses.blogspot.com/2009/10/god-goalpost-and-gimme-scriptures.html

    http://politicalverses.blogspot.com/2009/10/double-dactyl-by-julie-larios.html

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  4. Several years ago, at the 50th annual meeting of the Society for Ethnomusicology, someone got up and read an entire history of the society in a chain of double dactyls. After a long day of serious academic papers, it caused uproarious laughter. I'll get to work on this!

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  5. Well, it's true, my double dactyl over at Political Verses doesn't have the name of a famous individual, but it does have the name of a crazy football team...does that count? And I'm proud to say that I came up with a tortured dactylic six-syllable single word ("Fort-Oglethorpishly"?)that pleased me. When I was learning about double dactyls, the six-syllable single word was always the shining light of the poem (and John Hollander, who promoted this form, said that once a six-syllable word had been used, it was off the table - couldn't be used again. So those words can get very creative....)

    Okay - here is another, though it can't hold a candle to Pat Lewis's example (above) which is pure genius.

    Diggery Dockery
    Emily Dickinson
    wrote about Nobody,
    frigates and fame.


    Flies in most poetry
    non-metaphorically
    buzz us, but Emily's
    flies aren't the same.

    (I'll try to come up with some others...) Fun, Tricia! Thanks.

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  6. Oops - I made an assumption that the "Pat" who contributed earlier was Pat Lewis, but I take that back. Pat-Whoever - that is a brilliant contribution/ I love the "quantumechanically" line.

    About the last lines of each quatrain - a double spondee would mean four stressed syllables in a row. That's not what's happening. It's a dactyl plus a single stressed syllable to cap it off, no?

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  7. Okay, this is really fun! Here are my experiments with double dactyls:

    Daisies and daffodils
    Eleanor Roosevelt
    Rode on a bicycle
    Down to the lake.

    Sixty-four suffragettes
    Galloped behind her as
    Eleanor taught them to
    Make no mistake.

    ********

    Laggardy-Saggardy
    Jefferson Cavendish
    Fiddled and faddled and
    Loitered and whined.

    Ravenous tigers came
    Leaping to eat him, so
    Jefferson learned how to
    Move his behind.

    ********

    Camouflage-Sophophage,
    Benjamin Rosenbaum
    Lounges in Switzerland
    Writing a book.

    Characters circle him
    Polymorphetically,
    Tugging at strangenesses,
    Whispering, "Look!"

    --Kate Coombs (Book Aunt)

    That last is about a writer of speculative fiction. He calls himself a sophophage, among other things. And yes, I varied the form here and there!

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  8. Kate, those are fabulous! Love "polymorphetically" and the galloping suffragettes!

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  9. Thanks, Julie! I have to tell you that I thought about writing one on Emily Dickinson, so I was pleased to see yours--and amazed you were able to address her fly poem in this particular poetic structure!

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  10. This one is inspired by the latest dinosaur book I'm reading with my 8-year old (just shoot me now ...)

    Scarety Rarity
    Quetzalcoatlus the
    Mexican dinosaur
    what a surprise!

    Pterosaur terrible
    wings unbelievable
    ultrareptilian
    king of the skies!

    Okay, I'll admit I cheated after the name with the word the. Just in case you need the pronunciation, it's KET-sahl-koh-AHT-lus.

    I need to work on this... thinking... thinking...

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  11. Great double dactyls, everyone!

    I decided to write a couple of double dactyls about characters from children's books.


    Higgeldy piggeldy
    Max was a "wild thing,"
    Got into mischief,
    Was sent to his room,

    Kicked up a rumpus
    With like-minded wild things.
    Some kiddies go crazy
    Once they leave the womb.



    Hickory dickory
    Charlotte Arachnid--
    A writer, a weaver--
    Spun tales for her friend,

    Wilbur, the runt pig,
    She nurtured and cherished.
    That spider was loyal
    And true to the end.

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  12. Well, I chose Emily before reading the comments.

    Higgledy-Piggledy
    Emily Dickinson
    Dressed all in white while she
    Eschewed all prose.

    Scribbling poems that
    Nobody would publish
    That all could be sung to
    The song “Yellow Rose.”

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  13. Internet Spinternet
    Tricia the blogerette
    poses her poem posts
    into the sky.

    Teachers, librarians,
    mothers, grammarians
    gather words gratefully.
    “This one I’ll try.”

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  14. I love these! Here are a few more, inspired by Halloween reading, teaching my undergrads music history, and my son's favorite book on inventions, respectively.


    Tippety Typety
    Poe (Edgar Allen)
    Sat down at his desk
    At a quarter past four.

    Moaning and groaning
    And clutching his stomach
    “Oh WHY did I eat so much
    crow? NEVERMORE!”

    ---

    Knickety Knockety
    Ludwig von Beethoven
    Wanted to write just one
    Symphony more

    In want of ideas, he
    Sat down to ponder,
    When “Dum dum dum DUM”
    Came a rap at the door.

    ---

    Flippety Flappety
    Orville and Wilbur, they
    Wanted to ride a bike
    Into the sky.

    They fiddled and tinkered,
    Fell over and over.
    They made some mistakes, sure.
    But now we can fly!

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  15. Hi Tricia ~ First foray into double dactyl and first post on your blog. Double challenge! This was inspired by a Poetry Alive! post on Facebook about Coleridge.

    Xanadu Shmanadu
    Samuel Coleridge
    created his Kubla
    throughout the night.

    But oh! the intruder
    a damsel from Porlock
    who found the poor poet
    high as a kite.

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  16. Tricia,

    Here's another double dactyl for you:


    Gravity savity
    Isaac, Sir, Newton,
    Math’matical genius
    And physicist too,

    Got into alchemy…
    Transmutability…
    Tried making gold
    From a base metal brew.

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  17. Tricia,

    I'm ba-a-a-a-a-ck...with another double dactyl over at Political Verses:

    Better Duck...It's Dick: A Poem about Dick Cheney's Hunting Prowess

    http://politicalverses.blogspot.com/2009/10/better-duckits-dick-poem-about-dick.html

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  18. Elaine: "Better Duck...It's Dick" has got to be one of the best poem titles of the new millenium.

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  19. Thanks, Julie. I'm a sucker for a catchy title--or one with a play on words.

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  20. Love these! I actually wrote one, didn't think I could.

    holy guacamole
    author Judy Schachner
    Siamese, not chihuahua
    Skippyjon plots

    he bounces big boy bed
    closet is planet Mars
    perritos amigos
    books checked out lots

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  21. Revised:
    holy guacamole
    Siamese, not chihuahua
    author Judy Schachner
    Skippyjon plots

    he bounces big boy bed
    closet is planet Mars
    perritos amigos
    books checked out lots

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  22. Third time's the charm...more revisions. Here's the link:
    http://maclibrary.wordpress.com/2009/10/22/double-dactyl-i-wrote-one/

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  23. sadly I remember only the first verse of the following, which I read in college:

    Higgledy piggledy
    Physicist Heisenberg
    Dotted his theories with
    H-bars and q's [pronounced "cues"]

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  24. I'm a bit (two years) late to this thread, but I wrote one even longer ago than that:

    Tremolo, Shlemolo
    Vladimir Horowitz
    What a pianist he
    Turned out to be!

    Even when he was an
    Octogenarian
    Few on this earth could play
    Better than he.

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  25. I forgot to mention: this page (http://lonestar.texas.net/~robison/dactyls.html) identifies the "/ _ _ /" as a "choriamb". However, it's the only place I've seen that term, so take it as you will.

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