Saturday, April 13, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 13

 For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.


Looking down
the microscope
Can you see what I see?
A drop of water
strange creatures
least things
ten times better

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Looking Down by Steve Jenkins
  • The Microscope by Maxine Kumin, pictures by Arnold Lobel
  • Can You See What I See?: On the Road by Walter Wick
  • A Drop of Water: A Book of Science and Wonder by Walter Wick
  • Strange Creatures: The Story of Walter Rothschild and His Museum by Lita Judge
  • Least Things: Poems About Small Natures by Jane Yolen, photographs by Jason Stemple
  • Ten Times Better by Richard Michelson, paintings by Leonard Baskin
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Friday, April 12, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 12

Happy Poetry Friday! For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Fireflies at midnight
flicker flash
light up the night
sky magic

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Fireflies at Midnight by Marilyn Singer, pictures by Ken Robbins 
  • Flicker Flash by Joan Bransfield Graham, illustrations by Nancy Davis
  • Light Up the Night by Jean Reidy, pictures by Margaret Chodos-Irvine
  • Sky Magic, compiled by Lee Bennett Hopkins, illustrations by Mariusz Stawarski
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

This week, Poetry Friday is hosted by Jone Rush MacCulloch. I hope you'll take the time to check out all things poetic being shared today.

Thursday, April 11, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 11

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Today's poem is a little different. This is my attempt at using book titles to fashion a "Where I'm From" poem in the style of George Ella Lyons. You will see it is created in a series of book stack stanzas, using the same title to begin each one. I hope you learn a little about me, as this is an autobiographical poem. 





I'm from
Children of the Great Depression
the button box
the hard-times jar
earn it
save it
waiting is not easy

I'm from
chalk
kitchen science
handsprings
summersaults
messing around on the monkey bars

I'm from
gone fishing
toasting marshmallows
a walk in the woods
follow the moon home
finding wonders
the pebble in my pocket

I'm from
four seasons make a year
love that dog
let me fix you a plate
museum trip
there's a map on my lap
are we there yet?

I’m from
that’s a possibility
count on me
we all play
ALL are welcome
friends beyond measure

Where are you from?

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.


Sources
  • I'm From by Gary R. Gray, Jr., pictures by Oge Mora
  • Children of the Great Depression by Russell Freedman
  • The Button Box by Margarette S. Reid, illustrations by Sarah Chamberlain
  • The Hard-Times Jar by Ethel Footman Smothers, illustrations by John Holyfield
  • Earn It!: A Moneybunny Book by Cinders McLeod 
  • Save It!: A Moneybunny Book by Cinders McLeod 
  • Waiting Is Not Easy!-An Elephant and Piggie Book by Mo Willems
  • Chalk by Bill Thomson
  • Kitchen Science by Shar Levine and Leslie Johnstone 
  • Handsprings by Douglas Florian
  • Summersaults by Douglas Florian
  • Messing Around on the Monkey Bars: and Other School Poems for Two Voices by Betsy Franco, illustrations by Jessie Hartland 
  • Gone Fishing: A Novel in Verse by Tamera Will Wissinger, illustrations by Matthew Cordell 
  • Toasting Marshmallows: Camping Poems by Kristine O'Connell George, illustrations by Kate Kiesler 
  • A Walk in the Woods by Nikki Grimes, illustrations by Jerry Pinkney and Brian Pinkney 
  • Follow the Moon Home: A Tale of One Idea, Twenty Kids, and a Hundred Sea Turtles by Philippe Cousteau and Deborah Hopkinson, illustrations by Meilo So
  • Finding Wonders: Three Girls Who Changed Science by Jeannine Atkins
  • The Pebble in My Pocket: A History of Our Earth by Meredith Hooper, illustrations by Chris Coady 
  • Four Seasons Make a Year by Anne Rockwell, illustrations by Megan Halsey 
  • Love That Dog by Sharon Creech 
  • Let Me Fix You a Plate: A Tale of Two Kitchens by Elizabeth Lilly
  • Museum Trip by Barbara Lehman
  • There's a Map on My Lap! All About Maps (The Cat in the Hat's Learning Library) by Tish Rabe, illustrations by Aristides Ruiz 
  • Are We There Yet? by Dan Santat
  • That's a Possibility!: A Book About What Might Happen by Bruce Goldstone
  • Count on Me by Miguel Tanco
  • We All Play by Julie Flett 
  • All Are Welcome by Alexandra Penfold, illustrations by Suzanne Kaufman
  • Friends Beyond Measure by Lalena Fisher
  • Where Are You From? by Yamile Saied Méndez, illustrations by Jaime Kim
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Wednesday, April 10, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 10

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Blooming beneath the sun
the Earth is painted green
Redwoods
grow
up tall and high
no two alike
between earth and sky

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Blooming Beneath the Sun, poems by Christina Rosetti, art by Ashley Bryan
  • The Earth Is Painted Green: A Garden of Poems About Our Planet, edited by Barbara Brenner, illustrations by S.D. Schindler
  • Redwoods by Jason Chin
  • Grow: A Novel in Verse by Juanita Havill, illustrations by Stanislawa Kodman
  • Up! Tall! And High! by Ethan Long
  • No Two Alike by Keith Baker
  • Between Earth & Sky: Legends of Native American Sacred Places by Joseph Bruchac, illustrations by Thomas Locker
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Tuesday, April 09, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 9

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

In the middle of the night
a crack in the clouds
one big rain
tap dancing on the roof

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • In the Middle of the Night: Poems from a Wide-Awake House by Laura Purdie Salas, illustrations by Angela Matteson
  • A Crack In the Clouds and Other Poems by Constance Levy, illustrations by Robin Bell Corfield
  • One Big Rain: Poems for Rainy Days compiled by Rita Gray, illustrations by Bryan O'Rourke
  • Tap Dancing on the Roof: Sijo (Poems) by Linda Sue Park, pictures by Istvan Banyai
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Monday, April 08, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 8

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

All the world
Is ... was ...
oodles of animals
green on green
All different now
where once there was a wood
hard hat area
To change a planet
THINK BIG
Handle with care
Let it begin here

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • All the World by Liz Garton Scanlon, illustrations by Marla Frazee
  • Is  was by Deborah Freedman
  • Oodles of Animals by Lois Ehlert
  • Green on Green by Dianne White, illustrations by Felicita Sala
  • All Different Now: Juneteenth, the First Day of Freedom by Angela Johnson, illustrations by E.B. Lewis
  • Where Once There Was a Wood by Denise Fleming
  • Hard Hat Area by Susan L. Roth
  • To Change a Planet by Christina Soontornvat, illustrations by Rachele Jomepour Bell
  • Think Big by Liz Garton Scanlon, illustrations by Vanessa Brantley-Newton
  • Handle With Care: An Unusual Butterfly Journey by Loree Griffin Burns, photographs by Ellen Harasimowicz
  • Let It Begin Here! by Don Brown
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Sunday, April 07, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 7

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Near one cattail
frogs sing songs
Hidden in the grass
a nest full of eggs
A celebration of bees
flip, float, fly
Red sings from treetops
and then it’s spring

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Near One Cattail: Turtles, Logs, and Leaping Frogs by Anthony D. Fredericks, illustrations by Jennifer DiRabbio
  • Frogs Sing Songs by Yvonne Winer, illustrations by Tony Oliver
  • Hidden in the Grass by Barbara Taylor
  • A Nest Full of Eggs by Priscilla Belz Jenkins, illustrations by Lizzy Rockwell
  • A Celebration of Bees: Helping Children to Write Poetry by Barbara Juster Esbensen
  • Red Sings From Treetops: A Year In Colors by Joyce Sidman, illustrations by Pamela Zagarenski
  • And Then It's Spring by Julie Fogliano, illustrations by Erin E. Stead
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Saturday, April 06, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 6

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Hidden
underground
seeds
listen to the wind
twist
jump at the sun
planting the wild garden

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Hidden by Loic Dauvillier, illustrations by Marc Lizano, ink by Greg Salsedo
  • Underground by Shane Evans
  • Seeds by Ken Robbins
  • Listen to the Wind: The Story of Dr. Gred & Three Cups of Tea by Greg Mortenson and Susan L. Roth, collages by Susan L. Roth
  • Twist: Yoga Poems by Janet S. Wong, artwork by Julie Paschkis
  • Jump at the Sun: The True Life Tale of Unstoppable Storycatcher Zora Neale Hurston by Alicia D. Williams, illustrations by Jacqueline Alcántara
  • Planting the Wild Garden by Kathryn O. Galbraith, illustrations by Wendy Anderson Halperin
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Friday, April 05, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 5

Happy Poetry Friday! For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.


How To Be a Butterfly

Step gently out
flutter and hum
you can fly!

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • How To Be a Butterfly by Laura Knowles, pictures by Catell Ronca
  • Step Gently Out by Helen Frost, illustrations by Rick Lieder
  • Flutter & Hum: Animal Poems = Aleteo y zumbido: Poemas de Animales by Julie Paschkis
  • You Can Fly: The Tuskegee Airmen by Carole Boston Weatherford, illustrations by Jeffery Boston Weatherford
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

This week, Poetry Friday is hosted by Irene Latham at Live Your Poem. I hope you'll take the time to check out all things poetry being shared today.

Thursday, April 04, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 4

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Outside your window
a nest is noisy
the company of crows
talk, talk, squawk!
Joyful noise

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Outside Your Window: A First Book of Nature by Nicola Davies, illustrations by Mark Hearld
  • A Nest is Noisy by Diana Hutts Aston, illustrations by Sylvia Long
  • The Company of Crows: A Book of Poems by Marilyn Singer, illustrations by Linda Saport
  • Talk, Talk, Squawk!: A Human's Guide to Animal Communication by Nicola Davies, illustrations by Neal Clayton
  • Joyful Noise: Poems for Two Voices by Paul Fleischman, illustrations by Eric Beddows
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Wednesday, April 03, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 3

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

Waiting for high tide
sand
skin of a fish, bones of a bird
a suitcase of seaweed
an old shell
rare treasure
a world of wonders

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Waiting for High Tide by Nikki McClure
  • Sand by Ellen Prager, illustrations by Nancy Woodman
  • Skin of a Fish, Bones of a Bird by Helen Frost
  • A Suitcase of Seaweed and Other Poems by Janet S. Wong 
  • An Old Shell: Poems of the Galapagos by Tony Johnston, pictures by Tom Pohrt
  • Rare Treasure: Mary Anning and Her Remarkable Discoveries by Don Brown
  • A World of Wonders: Geographic Travels in Verse and Rhyme by J. Patrick Lewis, pictures by Alison Jay
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Tuesday, April 02, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 2

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems. This poem was inspired by Cole Brauer, the first American woman to race solo nonstop around the world.

Over and under the waves
water sings blue
trailblazers
sail away
reaching for the moon
The sky's the limit

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • Over and Under the Waves by Kate Messner, art by Christopher Silas Neal
  • Water Sings Blue by Kate Coombs, illustrations by Meilo So
  • Trailblazers: Poems of Exploration by Bobbi Katz, art by Carin Berger
  • Sail Away: Poems by Langston Hughes, art by Ashley Bryan
  • Reaching for the Moon by Buzz Aldrin, paintings by Wendell Minor
  • The Sky's the Limit: Stories of Discoveries by Women and Girls by Catherine Thimmesh, illustrations by Melissa Sweet
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Monday, April 01, 2024

NPM 2024 - Book Spine Poem 1

For National Poetry Month this year, I am perusing my bookshelves and building book spine poems.

At this very moment
beneath the sun
birds build nests
butterflies fly
an island grows
The world is waiting for you

Sources
  • At This Very Moment by Jim Arnosky
  • Beneath the Sun by Melissa Stewart, illustrations by Constance R. Bergum
  • Birds Build Nests by Yvonne Winer, illustrations by Tony Oliver
  • Butterflies Fly by Yvonne Winer, illustrations by Karen Lloyd-Jones
  • An Island Grows by Lola Schaefer, illustrations by Cathie Felstead
  • The World Is Waiting for You by Barbara Kerley
I hope you'll come back again to see what new poem I've cobbled together. You can find all the poems I've written this month on the Book Spine Poems page. 

Friday, March 29, 2024

National Poetry Month 2024

This year for National Poetry Month, I've decided to celebrate by writing book spine poems. I figure this is a great way for me to revisit the books on my shelves and dig deep into poetry and children's literature.

Here's a sneak peak.


In the sea
on the wing
between earth and sky
light and shadow
Everything is a poem

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

Sources
  • In the Sea by David Elliott, illustrations by Holly Meade
  • On the Wing by David Elliott, illustrations by Becca Stadtlander
  • Between Earth & Sky: Legends of Native American Sacred Places by Joseph Bruchac, illustrations by Thomas Locker
  • Light & Shadow by Myra Cohn Livingston, photographs by Barbara Rogasky
  • Everything is a Poem: The Best of J. Patrick Lewis by J. Patrick Lewis, illustrations by Maria Christina Pritelli

It will be a fun month. I do hope you'll join me.

Thursday, March 28, 2024

Poetry Friday and Pantoums

Welcome to Poetry Friday! I'm so happy to be hosting you here today. I normally round up old-school style, but I'm trying InLinkz today. We'll see how it goes. 

I particularly love hosting on the last Friday of the month, when my poetry sisters and I write to a new prompt. This month's challenge was to write a pantoum that included an animal. Here is an introduction to the form from Poets.org.

The pantoum originated in Malaysia in the fifteenth-century as a short folk poem, typically made up of two rhyming couplets that were recited or sung. However, as the pantoum spread, and Western writers altered and adapted the form, the importance of rhyming and brevity diminished. 

I was worried about the rhyme scheme, but letting go of this requirement made experimenting with this form easier. A pantoum is made up of stanzas of four lines where lines 2 and 4 of each stanza are repeated as lines 1 and 3 of the next stanza. In some versions, the final stanza uses the 3rd and 1st lines of the first stanza for lines 2 and 4. In this case, every line in the poem is used twice. In other versions, the final stanza uses only three repeating lines, with the first line of the poem repeated as the last line.

I'm still heartbroken over the loss of my sweet Cooper, who's been gone just under two weeks. My poem is for him.

Cooper's Pantoum

If I am missing you
I will not declare it
speaking it aloud makes it real
I'll quietly profess my love instead

I do not declare it
but still ache from your loss
I quietly profess my love
on morning walks alone

I still ache from your loss
watching other dogs sets me back
on morning walks alone
I take your favorite paths

Watching other dogs sets me back
will I love another as I have loved you?
I take your favorite paths
and with my heart remember

Will I love another as I have loved you?
speaking it aloud makes it real
With all my heart I remember
that I am missing you

Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

You can find the poems shared by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

    Would you like to try the next challenge? In April we’re exploring the work of Rebecca Kai Dotlich and Georgia Heard’s Welcome to the Wonder House, and noodling through answers to what we consider to "unanswerable questions." What do ants sound like? How do stars sing? Let's WONDER as we wander through the natural world - and ask and answer those wonderings in whatever way which appeals to you. Are you in? Good! You have a month to craft your creation and share it on April 26th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

    Please join the Poetry Friday party by leaving your link below, and don't forget to leave a comment to let us know you're here. Happy poetry Friday, friends!  

    You are invited to the Inlinkz link party!

    Click here to enter

    Friday, February 23, 2024

    Poetry Sisters Write Epistolary Poems

    The challenge this month was to write an epistolary poem in the form of a love letter or Valentine. I missed our Zoom on Sunday, so I have no idea what approach my poetry peeps are taking. I hadn't given the topic of this one much thought until I sat down to write and decided to address some very sad news I received this week. 

    This is my buddy Cooper. We rescued him about 6 weeks after our first rescue, Sydney, was put to sleep following a short and nasty battle with cancer. In just a few days we'll celebrate Cooper's 10th "Gotcha" Day. 

    This is Cooper on February 26, 2014, his first day in his forever home.

    This is Cooper enjoying a Pup Cup after a visit to the vet on Tuesday.

    Here's my poem.

    Love Letter to My Dying Dog

    Dearest Cooper,

    It's sad really
    how often you're called by something 
    other than your given name
      Stinky Breath
       Honey Bunny
        Butt Licker
         Goodyear
          Asshat
    I hope you can forgive your father
    that last one
    Your penchant for eating couch cushions 
    and stealing his sandwiches 
    has made him perpetually grumpy

    I adore you, you know
    there was never any question of it
    You wormed your way into my heart
    the first time I laid eyes on you
    You were a scrawny thing 
    a counter surfer from day one
    as life on the streets taught you to
    grab any food you could find 
    to survive

    Survive you did 
    but more than that 
    you thrived
    giving and receiving more love 
    than we ever imagined
    Your deafness was a hurdle
    we learned to negotiate
    but sometimes I think 
    you were happy  
    to tune out the world 
    live in the silence of your head
    you were never bothered by 
    thunder or fireworks
    like your predecessor was

    You reluctantly tolerated the old girl
    we rescued during COVID
    showing first your anger and disdain
    (you didn't sleep with me for weeks!)
    until you adopted an air of 
    casual indifference
    It was clear, however
    that you missed her 
    once she was gone

    Do you know that 
    I'm marking time now?
    That extra treats and kisses
    signal the beginning 
    of the end?
    That your days have been numbered
    by cancer's ugly return?
    My heart longs for more
      More walks
       More hugs
        More time
    But I also pray for less
      Less pain
       Less heartache
        Less loss

    I know there will be tears
    and sadness
    I will embrace them 
    while I see you through this
    long goodbye
    I will be by your side
    to the very end
    You'll never have to wonder
    how I feel about you
    my beautiful, sweet boy

    Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

    You can find the poems shared by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

      Would you like to try the next challenge? In March, we’re writing in the form of the pantoum. The pantoum is a Malaysian verse form comprised of a series of quatrains, with the second and fourth lines of each quatrain repeated as the first and third lines of the next. You can learn more about this form at The Philadelphia Writer's Workshop and Masterclass. Are you in? Good! You have a month to craft your creation and share it on March 29th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

      Please take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Tabatha Yeatts at The Opposite of Indifference. Happy poetry Friday, friends!  

      Friday, January 26, 2024

      Poetry Sisters Write Ekphrastic Poems

      Hello, and welcome to the first poetry sisters' exercise of 2024! This month the challenge was to write a poem to an image chosen from the work of piñata artist Roberto Benavidez. Sara sent us the link to his Hieronymus Bosch Piñatas as a starting point. There were so many to choose from! 

      Normally, when faced with a monthly challenge, I research the subject, the form, the poet, or whatever else might relate to the topic. During our Zoom session on Sunday, I went down the rabbit hole into researching The Garden of Earthly Delights, the triptych by Bosch that inspired some of Benavidez's pieces. While it was interesting, it didn't help my writing AT ALL. I suppose research is antithetical to the form of ekphrastic poetry. Laura suggested I look at the image and write about what I saw and felt. I brainstormed a number of ideas, and then, since I'd decided to write in the triolet form, I took my notes and wrote a draft of a poem.

      Here's the image that inspired my poem. 

      Triolet for Roberto's Bosch Cat

      orange tabby is on the prowl
      loses all time in a garden
      chasing fish and fowl
      orange tabby is on the prowl
      slinks past the rake and the trowel
      never asks for leave or pardon
      orange tabby is on the prowl
      loses all time in a garden

      Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2024. All rights reserved.

      You can read my Poetry Sisters' work at the links below. 

        Would you like to try the next challenge? In February, we’re writing Epistolary poems in the form of love letters or Valentines. Are you in? Good! You have a month to craft your creation and share it on February 23rd in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

        Please take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Susan Thomsen at Chicken Spaghetti. Happy poetry Friday, friends!  

        Friday, December 29, 2023

        Poetry Sisters Write Elfchen

        The challenge this month was to write an elfchen. An elfchen is described as a "German cinquain" poem. Instead of using syllables, this poem has 11 words, the lines having 1-2-3-4-1 words, respectively. Wikipedia calls this an elevenie (German Elfchen – Elf "eleven" and -chen as diminutive suffix to indicate diminutive size and endearment).

        I'll admit that I wasn't particularly thrilled with this challenge. Don't get me wrong, I think Adelaide Crapsey's cinquain poems are genius. I love her work so much that I even visited her grave when I stopped to visit the graves of Frederick Douglass and Susan B. Anthony at Mount Hope Cemetery in Rochester, NY (my hometown).
        In its simplest form, Crapsey's ciquain follows a syllabic pattern of 2 / 4 / 6 / 8 / 2. 

        However, the cinquain has long been used by (some) classroom teachers to "teach poetry" and in this form, it is most didactic and unpoetic. Yes, I said it. The Wikipedia entry on the elevenie reads like all those cinquain handouts I so loathe. This is the structure they recommend for this form.

        Row Words Content
        1 1 A thought, an object, a colour, a smell or the like
        2 2 What does the word from the first row do?
        3 3 Where or how is the word of row 1?
        4 4 What do you mean?
        5 1 Conclusion: What results from all this? What is the outcome?

        Here is the way the cinquain is taught in schools. The purpose is generally "to help learners stretch and develop their creative writing skills in a structured formula while reviewing parts of speech." Instead of syllables, it uses word count, so it looks just like the elevenie.
        Image from Free Cinquain Poem.

        Here is a cinquain of Crapsey's. Note that it follows none of the conventions described above.

        Niagara
        Seen on a Night in November

        How frail
        Above the bulk
        Of crashing water hangs,
        Autumnal, evanescent, wan,
        The moon.

        I really don't understand how this beautiful poetic form morphed into a tool for teaching parts of speech. Suffice it to say that in calling this poem a "German cinquain," I was not very excited and a bit nervous about this challenge. At first, I tried to tell a story with my poems, but that approach generally didn't work for me. I also played around with adding German words. I wrote a lot of crap, but I also wrote a few poems I'm relatively pleased with. I'm sharing three poems, and because I like to break the rules, one of them is a reverse elfchen (1-4-3-2-1). The first poem is about my dad.

        Gesundheit!
        Our answer
        to his loud
        full-bodied and thunderous
        sneezes

        Peace?
        Not yet.
        Some say never.
        Pray. Don't lose faith.
        Hope.

        Truths—
        Climate change is real.
        Life is short.
        I love
        you.

        Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

        You can read the pieces written by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

          Do take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Michelle Kogan. Happy poetry Friday, friends!  

          Friday, November 24, 2023

          Poetry Sisters Write "In the Style Of" Valerie Worth

          The challenge this month was to write "in the style of" Valerie Worth. You can learn more about Valerie Worth and read some of her poems at Spotlight on NCTE Poets: Valerie Worth, with Lee Bennett Hopkins, a post by Renée M. LaTulippe at No Water River. 

          Worth's poems are meditations on the little things in world around us. Writing in free verse, her keen sense of observation and economy of language make everyday objects seem extraordinary.

          When William was in third grade (2009-2010) his teacher had the class copy and illustrate poems that "spoke" to them in their journals. This poem by Valerie Worth was one of his choices.

          In Paul Janeczko's book The Place My Words Are Looking For: What Poets Say About
          and Through Their Work
          , Worth had this to say about poetry.
          "One of poetry’s most wonderful features is that it can get beneath the surface of things and explore them not as mere objects but as remarkable phenomena with lively personalities of their own. Articles as coat hangers can take on unexpected dimensions within the realm of a poem; and if this can happen with coat hangers, then the world must be filled with other ‘ordinary’ subjects just waiting for poetry to come along and reveal their extraordinary selves."
          Worth's poems are magical, so emulating her was quite a challenge. I used the poem porches as my mentor text.
          attic

          in the attic
          time is fluid

          the air thick
          with memory

          trinkets and photos
          recall a lifetime

          a rocking horse sways
          and gathers dust 

          an old teddy bear
          welcomes a new friend

          holiday boxes wait
          expectant and hopeful

          Poem ©Tricia Stohr-Hunt, 2023. All rights reserved.

          You can read the pieces written by my Poetry Sisters at the links below. 

            Would you like to try the next challenge? In December we’re writing in the form of the elfchen, or German cinquain. You can learn about this form at German With Nicole.  Are you in? Good! We are continuing with our 2023 theme of TRANSFORMATION. If you’re still game, you have a month to craft your creation and share it on December 29th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We look forward to reading your poems!  

            Do take some time to check out all the wonderful poetic things being shared and collected today by Ruth at There is no such thing as a God-forsaken town. Happy poetry Friday, friends!  

            Wednesday, November 01, 2023

            A Cento Challenge

            This month Every Day Poems offered up a challenge to "craft a Cento from some of your favorite Every Day Poems lines." They also added this extension.

            For some extra fun, you’re invited to hand-letter your Cento poem, using a different style or color for each unique line you’ve gathered from another poet. Or, you could put each line on a different slip of paper and collage your poem together.

            Challenge accepted!

            Here is my untitled cento. (Click to enlarge.)


            It reads:
            the whole world’s chanting desire
            between stars or heartbeats
            beyond reach, beyond reckoning 
            and in slow-motion
            a tide, incoming: vast
            when pulled away, return always to me

            The lines in this cento come from the following poems:
            • Black Dirt by Helen Pruitt Wallace
            • Report [an excerpt] by Elizabeth C. Herron
            • Grendel In Dawn’s Early Light by Rick Maxson
            • Into the Woods by Laurie Klein
            • Into the Woods by Laurie Klein
            • Juliet’s Aubade by Sara Barkat