Thursday, August 06, 2009

Poetry Stretch Results - Dictionary Poems

The challenge this week was to write a poem in the form of a dictionary entry. Here are the results.
Jane Yolen left this poem in the comments.
    Pal·ette n.
    A board, typically with a hole for the thumb,
    which an artist can hold while painting
    and on which colors are mixed.

    [French, from Old French, small potter's shovel,
    diminutive of pale, shovel, spade,
    from Latin pāla "spade, shoulder blade."
    1622, "flat thin tablet used by an artist to lay and mix colors”
    Sense of "colors used by a particular artist" found first in 1882.

    A board and hole, wholly used,
    abused with color,
    from the choler of cadmium red
    to the dead black, lacking luster
    to the mustard and browns of soil,
    burnt sienna, burnt umber,
    the colors of the Palantine Hills,
    the palettined hills,
    the swirl and whirl and whorl of color
    all dug up and plastered on to the canvas
    with the help of the little spades.

    ©2009 Jane Yolen
Diane M. Davis shares a poem for the word levigate.

Laura Purdie Salas shares a poem for the word cold.

Kate Coombs left this poem in the comments.
    Underword
    Chthonic [from the Greek chthonios, meaning "under the earth," or chthon, simply "earth"]

    Drags your tongue down unless
    you let go of the ch; if not
    the pull extends to your head,
    your neck and your chest,
    your limbs. The dark
    waits, the heavy blanket of earth
    with its wriggle of worms
    belying the wait of dead rocks
    beneath, and farther still
    the great deep with its subtle river,
    its silent ferryman, its triple-headed thug
    of a dog, then a god
    with a burning black crown
    and stony eyes not-shining
    a welcome.
Harriet from spynotes left this poem in the comments.
    Eight [ayt]. n. or a. The cardinal number next after seven.
    Not quite small, not quite big.
    Formed by perfect circles joined by a cross in the middle.
    A crossroads.
    Turn it on its side and it makes infinity.
    From the middle of it,
    eight looks like forever.

    Homonym of ate, eight devours everything.
    Eight explains the disappearance of
    hot dogs, potato chips,
    cheerios, peanut butter,
    and that bar of chocolate
    that you hid in the back of the cupboard
    for emergencies.
    And possibly, once, a bug
    (but probably not).

    Eight is balls and yells and contests
    And hide-and-seek
    And skateboard tricks
    And pianos and a stuffed monkey, well-worn,
    And a frog left on the back porch in a bucket
    A little too long.
    Sorry, frog.

    Eight is nine almost.
    Soon.
    Not yet.
    An infinity in a moment.
Julie Larios of The Drift Record left this poem in the comments.
    GOOFY - a dippy dawg
    but gee (and oof and eeeeeeee)
    he can be fun,
    he can be whee,
    (this message brought to you by
    the olde gagaf, Buffoonery,
    the middle goffen's pal, Frivolity,
    the Modern Goofball, gaffe-inclined,
    a goofer off,
    a goofer up,
    a half-brain...dictionarily defined.)
    He may get goofy, sure,
    but no one else who's goofy
    (I mean me, and maybe you)
    ever seems to mind.
Here's my contribution.
miz·zle - very fine, misty rain n.
[
from the Middle English mysell and Middle Dutch misel]

The skies are heavy
with woolen clouds
of gray that
do not dump or pelt
but fairly spritz
the earth
in a nebulous
fog of delicious
rain
It's not too late if you still want to play. Leave me a note about your poem and I'll add it to the list.

4 comments:

  1. Here's my attempt:

    Eight [ayt]. n. or a. The cardinal number next after seven.
    Not quite small, not quite big.
    Formed by perfect circles joined by a cross in the middle.
    A crossroads.
    Turn it on its side and it makes infinity.
    From the middle of it,
    eight looks like forever.

    Homonym of ate, eight devours everything.
    Eight explains the disappearance of
    hot dogs, potato chips,
    cheerios, peanut butter,
    and that bar of chocolate
    that you hid in the back of the cupboard
    for emergencies.
    And possibly, once, a bug
    (but probably not).

    Eight is balls and yells and contests
    And hide-and-seek
    And skateboard tricks
    And pianos and a stuffed monkey, well-worn,
    And a frog left on the back porch in a bucket
    A little too long.
    Sorry, frog.

    Eight is nine almost.
    Soon.
    Not yet.
    An infinity in a moment.

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  2. I always seem to "stretch" too late in the week! Here is my offering, with etymology, pronunciation and definition being part of the poem itself:

    GOOFY - a dippy dawg
    but gee (and oof and eeeeeeee)
    he can be fun,
    he can be whee,
    (this message brought to you by
    the olde gagaf, Buffoonery,
    the middle goffen's pal, Frivolity,
    the Modern Goofball, gaffe-inclined,
    a goofer off,
    a goofer up,
    a half-brain...dictionarily defined.)
    He may get goofy, sure,
    but no one else who's goofy
    (I mean me, and maybe you)
    ever seems to mind.

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  3. I thought I was going to hate this stretch, but love the results, especially 8 and goofy because they are both so surprising and use words in individual ways.

    Jane

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  4. Harriet--I love your Eight! Brilliant!

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